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  命题作文 Essay: Some schools ask the applicants to compose the essay responding to several pre-set questions from the applicant’s personal point of views, to show their academic achievements, leadership ability, personal character, ability of facing challenges and difficulties, writing skills and so on. 有的学校会要求申请用自己的观点来撰写拟定好题目的作文,借此来判断申请人的学术成就,领导能力,性格特征,面临挑战和困难的能力,写作技能等。 目前有约300所大学使用Common Application (通用申请,参见附录的“通用申请Common Application以及如何使用”章节),包括顶尖的综合性名校如哈佛、耶鲁、普林斯顿等等以及几乎大部分的文理学院,而且必定有更多的学校将要加入Common Application的行列,否则这些学校就要面对失去很多优秀申请人的风险。在通用申请表里,对Essay的要求是一短一长。短Essay叫做Short Answer (短答),字数要求是少于150单词,题目是“请简单描述你的一个活动,可以是课外活动、个人活动、或者工作经历等”,英文原文是:“Please briefly elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)”。 The first of its kind, Admissions Essays has been assisting its clients achieve their educational goals by helping them tackle perhaps the most challenging part of the application process - the admission essay. Whether you are applying to College, Law School, MBA School, Grad School, or Medical School, you will be required to provide an essay to help the Admissions Committee decide whether you are a good candidate for admission to their school. As such, we have created very unique services to help you with your admission essay, with the sole goal of making you stand out from the crowd and greatly increase your chances for admission to the school and program of your choice. We offer two admission essay services: Model Admission Essay Development Our most popular service, and the most unique offering of its kind on the Internet, our custom model essay development service provides you with an actual model essay drafted from scratch, completely tailored to your own personal facts. Through our proprietary Biography (TM) process, our experienced writers gather all your pertinent personal facts, and turn them into a completely unique, one-of-a-kind model admission essay. Admission Essay Critique / Analysis / Revision If you have already drafted your admission essay our editors can provide constructive criticism and detailed analyses on improving them. Our critique/editing services are designed specifically for those who would like the "professional" review, before finalizing their admission essay. Application essays give you an opportunity to explain -- through narrative, example, and analysis -- aspects of your personal, educational, and professional history that may have led you to pursue an advanced degree at a particular institution. Admissions committees rely heavily on these essays to put a face on impersonal test scores and grade point averages. For this reason, it's important for you to use details and thoughtful self-presentation to make your face one that stands out in a crowd. Whether you're applying to medical school or a program in landscape architecture, your essay should demonstrate your ability to make connections between your experience, education, and the program you have chosen. The most challenging aspect of the application essay is making those connections in a relatively small amount of space.

      Essay也可看作是说明文或议论文。总体来说就是引用别的事物来证明某个观点。 它分三个部分
1.main idea主题
2.supporting parts{details)(细节)
3.concluding sentence 结束语 一篇ESSAY最少要三句话,就是我刚刚所写的大的主体。

      另外Journal 和 Essay 有些相似,journal更不规范些,就像是博客里写的随笔,日志,但不是日记,不记录心情. 在加拿大Essay从10年级开始正式的学习,在这之前一般都是Journal.   
Essay Structure: Introductory paragraph 总起段
Thesis statement 中心   
Argument #1 Argument #2 Argument #3
Concluding sentence结束句
Body Paragraph #1中间段1 Topic sentence总起句 Explanation #1 Explanation #2 Explanation #3 Concluding Sentence结束句
Body Paragraph #2中间段2 Topic sentence 总起句 Explanation #1 Explanation #2 Explanation #3 Concluding Sentence
Body Paragraph #3中间段3 Topic sentence总起句 Explanation #1 Explanation #2 Explanation #3 Concluding Sentence
Concluding Paragraph总结段 *Paraphrase! Restate thesis   Summarize arguments Concluding Statement   

Essay一般有五段:
第一段是introduction
二到四段是body paragraph
最后一段是conclusion
第一段最后一句话叫做thesis statement 包括topic,controlling idea 和predictor
第一段的写作手法一般分为anecdote,quotation,general to specific,interesting facts or statistics,historical introduction。

      Body paragraph一般每一段都有三个main support,每个main support都附带minor support. Concluding paragraph一般有两种手法。 Restatement and final comment。 In the first paragraph, let others know what you are writing about. Then, bring out the points and explain it. A good essay does not need to be a long one. It just needs to have a good grammar, relevant points and good explanation. Add proverbs and good words if you can. 这只是essay 的基本结构,每一篇essay 老师都会考察你几个知识点,一点要根据你学的知识,把这些知识点写出来,不管你的观点如何,你只要从逻辑上证明你的观点就ok,最重要的一点是一定不能抄袭,国外学校对抄袭有严厉的处罚措施,最严重的会开除。您有任何方面的疑问,随时可以联系我们的客服人员。
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